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Selling Information By Mail
Okay…back to our series on selling information. Let’s get straight into Sales Letters. You know how to start. You make a list of every feature of your product, and then you turn them into benefits. Then you write your offer, then your order form. On this page is a great order form you can use as a template…
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The Fundementals of a Successful Order Form
- Attention Grabbing Headline
- A No-Risk Offer
- Guarantee
- Call to action
- Customer’s Information Details
- Payment Details
- Your Contact Details
- Layout & Graphics
- Other Attention Grabbers (Called Bells & Whistles in this country)
Last issue we covered the first five points above. Now let’s look at the remaining four.
6 & 7: Payment Details & Your Contact Details
Make it easy and don’t confuse. I can’t stress this too much. Confused prospects don’t buy. Have a look at the form on the previous page to get a good idea. With your contact details, put as many as you can. Can they order by post, by phone, by fax? The more ways a person can order the better the result.
8: Layout & Graphics
Black ink on yellow paper works for me and many others. The yellow paper only adds an extra cent to my printing costs but it does stand out…it does call attention. Also, your order form can’t be cluttered; it’s got to be pleasing on the eye. That’s why I always use a full-page order form. It gives me the room for what I want to include. Some marketers try to save a couple of cents on the printing costs and make the order form a half-page document, tacked to the end of the sales letter. I’m not saying you can’t do this. It’s just with a full-page order form you have the room to get your message across, and it looks clean and uncluttered. The choice is yours.
9: Other Attention Grabbers.
One item I do include is my Australian Business Number at the bottom of all my order forms. It lets my prospects know that I’m running a real business. Other devices you can use are guarantees in their own blocks of type. This reassures the prospect. You may wish to include a powerful testimonial as well. Pick the best one you’ve got to add credibilty to your offer.
Before We Begin…
Okay, let’s take stock of what we’ve got so far. You now have a list of benefits that your product provides, you have created a powerful offer, and you have your order form all ready. So what’s next? Yep…it’s time to write your sales letter.
There have been countless books and manuals written on this subject. I’ve spent thousands of dollars over the years myself, and I know for certain, the money has been well spent. It has helped my business grow, and I believe, in fact I know for certain…
If you can master the craft of writing copy that sells…well the sky’s the limit !
But there’s so much to learn, so many areas to delve into that will increase your knowledge. From writing dynamite headlines to human psychology…it all adds to your skills of writing hot selling copy. I’m always learning something new. And even the old pros of advertising will tell you they are still learning their craft.
So this subject is big. And I’m not so conceited that I will tell you that I can teach you everything about sales letters. It’s an ongoing process. It’s not my intention here to write a full course on writing copy…besides, to cover all the details; I would need hundreds of pages. I’ll leave the four tome classics to the masters. But I have learnt that I want to share with you…
Simple stuff, that once mastered, will make you money !
I’ve had some successes, and yes, on occasions I have bombed. But I persist and I get results. And sometimes the results blow me away. (Like a letter I wrote one Saturday afternoon that’s getting 20% response rate ! When this happens I thank my lucky stars that I’m in Mail Order.)
So I’m going to show you what works for me…and the best way to do that is with examples. So we’re going to go behind the scenes of a current campaign and see why this letter is working, why it is pulling orders like crazy. I’m going to lay in on the line and give it to you like it is.
So over the next few series of posts I’m going to reveal to you some powerful ways to increase your response rate on every letter you mail. Big call? Maybe…but I guarantee you, you will get ideas that you can turn into money in your Mail Order business.
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And it’s going to take a while to get through writing this sales letter segment. I don’t want to leave anything out. I want you to cash in on what I have learnt and what I have experienced in this industry.
So you’ll have to be patient with this one. It’s going to take a few posts to cover the ground…but It’ll be worth it I assure you ! So whether you’re new to Mail Order, or maybe you’re like some others already in the industry…doesn’t matter….
YOU ARE GOING TO LEARN SOMETHING NEW…AND THAT’S A PROMISE !
And don’t be overwhelmed by your lack of experience and start thinking you’ll never be able to write your own letters. You can ! Just be aware there is so much to learn…and the learning never stops.
And different books you read on this subject will reveal a different viewpoint, one or two more revelations that are new to you, maybe a key suggestion that will shed light on what you are doing. The old: "Aha, I get it !" experience.
Take what you need, add your own personal stamp to it, and then apply it to your letter.
You can of course, get others to write your piece for you. Many marketers do this. They hire the best and get results. But this article isn’t about getting others to do it.
It’s about doing it yourself.
And frankly, when I started, I could barely afford to post a few letters, let alone hire a professional copywriter. So I had to learn…and fast. I would get a sale, process the order, and then invest the money into mailing more letters…especially follow-up mailings to past enquiries.
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SUCCESS TIP: With my first mailing to a prospect I find I get the best response. They are the prospects who saw your ad and couldn’t wait to call your message bank and get more info. They get your letter and they are immediately attracted to your offer…and they buy straight away. But not every prospect will jump straight to the phone with credit card in hand. Some are only semi-interested, some are pre-occupied with certain issues going on in their lives, and others simply haven’t got the money at that particular time. So you’ve got to follow-up. I’ve found the second and third mailing, when responses are added together, are equal to the first mailing. Motto to the story? Always follow-up on your prospects. If you don’t, you’re leaving a lot of money on the table.
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So basically, I studied like mad. I’de write out successful sales letters by hand…over and over until I could feel the right words to use. And then I would write some more.
It’s not easy but you can learn the fundementals that will make the difference to your letters.
You can learn to…
Attract the attention and single out your chosen market, and you can learn to create interest in your piece. You can develop and master the art of creating desire in what you are selling. And you can learn the steps you need to take in order to bring forth a response from your prospects.
And I know I keep saying this but you must do it if you’re going to write effective copy. You’ve got to have a swipe file, a collection of successful sales pieces. You can see how others are doing it. What words they are using. You can use them to mould your own style of writing. Now I don’t mean for you to copy them word for word. Just use them as guidelines to follow when cerating your own piece.
Go one step further and write them in your own handwriting, or even on your keyboard…just write them out until you start to feel what the writer is trying to accomplish.
Now there is one critical element that you must be aware of if you are going to have a successful campaign. It doesn’t matter if your sales letter is written by Gary Halbert himself, it will still bomb if you don’t get this one right. What is it?
The audience. Those who recieve your letter…let me explain.
Three Elements of a Successful Direct Mail Campaign.
With any Direct Mail, whether it is lead generated prospects you are mailing to, or names that have been purchased from a list, there are three important elements that make a campaign successful
- Audience (Target market)
- Offer (What the customer gets)
- Creative (What’s in your sales package)
They are the big three…the audience is the most critical part of the equation. Then the offer, and then the creative comes a poor third.
An example of bad targeting would be doing a Direct Mailing to a rented list. Let’s say for this example that you own a lawn mowing business.
So you buy a list of residents in your area. You do your mailing and half of your letters wind up in the apartments of high-rises. Now that’s bad targeting and your responses would reflect this point. Wouldn’t matter how good your letter was…half the people who recieved it cannot use your service.
Now when this happens most people blame the copywriter who wrote the letter. But they should be looking at the list.
The list of names you send your offer to is the most important element…period !
Now that’s an extreme case but it does illustrate my point. So that’s why it’s critical you know exactly who your target market is, what they read, and how you can reach them affordably.
And that’s why your advertisement has got to narrow in and target only those that would be interested in your offer.
With two-step adv ertising, the ad brings you the leads. It’s the sales letter’s job to get the sale. So if one ad brings in 100 enquiries, and the other ad brings in 50 enquiries, which one would be the better ad ?
The 100 one?
Maybe. But if that ad was bringing in 100 people that were "sought of" interested in your offer, and the other ad was bringing in people who were…
- Absolutely thrilled about your kind of product
- Had recently bought a similar item through the mail and were happy with thier purchase
Which would be the better ad? You see what I mean?
It’s all about testing and measuring your audience.
You need to test your advertising until you come up with an ad that brings highly targeted prospects that are pre-sold on what you’re offering. Remember also, every audience is different in their tastes. lies and dislikes. In their wants, needs and desires.
Only by testing each audience will you discover what each one prefers.
The audience is the critical factor that determines your success. Then the offer, followed by the creative. So if you have pinpointed your buying market precisely, and your offer is spot-on and contains one or more premiums of interest, then you can get away with an average letter and still make a profit. Keep that in mind…now let’s get started.
Next post I’ll go over how to write a compelling, benefited-filled sales letter. In the meantime if you are looking for real down to earth strategies and tips on how to create a business from home go to my website www.workingfromhomeriches.com and purchase my e’book for only $47.00.
Till next time,
Peter Tonks.












